Everyone needs help sometimes. Some advice might improve your stuff. In this blog post we have to view everyone in our class' blog and tell them what needs fixed or changed. With everyone blogging about each person's blog it will really help improve our blogs allot. If our blogs are really good we will get more views.
First blog is Lorem's blog:
I think you should put your name on here because if you don't look at the picture you don't know whose blog this is. I would also add a little about your self.
I would also add a link to his blog so people can go view his blog to. Other then that I really like your blog.
The next blog is Keith's blog:
I would add some more pictures on this post and use Skitch on them to show the differences.
The next blog is Allyson's blog:
I think you should add a picture of yourself and tell us about yourself and make your pictures a little bigger if you have to you can make your blog a little wider so they will fit.
The next blog is Alexis Bryant's Blog:
I would use a different blog name we don't know what that means and and add some about you on here
Some of your pictures are missing
Where are those pictures make sure to preview and make sure everything looks good and shows up before you hit that publish button.
If I were you I would change the name and add a picture of you and a little about yourself so your viewers get to know you.
I really like this layout for a blog. I love the background and water dropps. I also love when the blogs are see through so you can see the background more.
Good blog name and I would add a picture and a little about yourself.
The text is kinda hard to read I would change the color and font to make it more readable for your viewers.
Add a little about your self an I would move it to the top.
Make sure to get caught up on missing assignments.
You have a lot good posts but there missing one thing pictures. Add lots of pictures. Pictures help to better explain and show the viewer what your trying to show or tell them .
Also one more thing in this post you posted it again. So at then it just started over and repeated itself again.
The next blog is Jane Johnson's Blog:
http://janiegirls.blogspot.com/
Add a picture of your self and some info let your readers get to know you. Also like I posted about another blog that had the same background I really like that background and how its see through and lets you see more of the background.
Jane I would just change this to Four Amazing Google Chrome Extensions because it makes the viewer think that it is your post on some one else's blog.
Jane last I would add a link so viewers can go view Alexis' blog. I really like you blog Jane. Keep up the good work.
Your picture runs off the page but the good thing is this is an easy fix just go into layout settings and make the blog a little wider. Then the picture would fit better.
Also post a link to David's blog so your viewers can visit his blog as well.
I like how you have a picture there and I like the way you made your blog look.
But I would make the font bigger so it would be easier to read.
The final blog is
Christopher Whitt's Blog: http://whittstopher.blogspot.com
Add some about you.
I like how you posted something not about this class.
Add a link to her blog so people can view here blog to.
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